题目内容
书面表达(15分)
假如你是Thomas, Jack 是你美国的一个笔友,前不久他写信告诉你他生活和学习上遇到的困难,希望你能给他提供一些帮助。请你根据下面一封E-mail, 写出你的建议。(80字左右)
Dear friend,
How is it going? I am writing to tell you something about my problems. I really need you help. I am very upset every day. I have too much homework, and I always stay up very late. I also find some difficulties learning math. I am under too much pressure. I don’t want to communicate with my parents, they don’t understand me. I can’t do what I want to do. What should I do?
Yours,
Jack
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you have so many problems in your life.
Yours
Thomas
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you have so many problems in your life. It’s natural that everyone will have problems, when you have problems you should try to overcome it and be happy. I think you should do your homework as quickly as possible in the daytime, try to go to bed before 10, it’s good for your health. I know math is a little difficult, if you want to learn it well you must listen very carefully in class, once you meet difficulties, you can ask the teachers or classmates for help, and do more math exercises. You also need to find some time to relax yourself. And you’d better talk with your parents more. Tell them your feelings, they are the people who love you best, try to understand them. Hope you will be happy again.
Yours,
Thomas
【解析】
试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。.如It’s natural that everyone will have problems, when you have problems you should try to overcome it and be happy. once you meet difficulties, you can ask the teachers or classmates for help, and do more math exercises.等,also等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:话题作文。