Question

【题目】(B)图示作文：根据图画内容，展开想象，写一篇小短文。

小安是一名初三的学生，运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文。

要求：(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

(2)词数在80100词之间。

(3)要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

Answer 1

【答案】Sport makes a difference

Xiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.

He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.

Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.

【解析】

本文属于图画作文，表达运动让小安的生活发生了巨大的变化。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容词原级+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。