Question

【题目】书面表达

“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成了一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。

注意：1.根据以上提示完成作文，内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；

2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort

How to Be a Greener Person?

It’s our duty to protect our environment around us. ___________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Be a Greener Person

It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：环境保护是中考常考的话题，对于本文的写作学生首先开门见山指出保护环境是非常重要的，是我们的责任，可以利用it作为形式主语的句式来展开；然后，对环境保护应该如何做进行阐述如拒绝一次性纸杯，随手关掉电灯，使用布做的购物袋，尽量骑自行车出行，保护动植物，防止工厂的排污等，从这几方面进行展开论述。句式上可以使用we’d better，It’s important for us to，We are supposed to等来阐述所写的内容。最后，一句话进行总结，说明如果这样做世界将会变得更美more and more beautiful。

写作亮点：本文难度不大，该生对写作条理性把握得很好，对于要做的几件事情，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词提高了语言的美度。