Question

【题目】张涛是一名九年级学生，面对繁重的学业和升学压力，他总是感到焦虑不安，晚上还经常失眠。请根据你所学的知识，针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。

要求：1、书写工整，语言连贯；

????? 2、词数：80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Dear Zhang Tao,

I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.

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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

Yours,

John

Answer 1

【答案】I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice. Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic. Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony. Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.

If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

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【解析】本文属于话题作文，利用色彩疗法，给张涛提些建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如firstly, secondly, finally, calm, peaceful, because, energetic, secondly, create, harmony以及perhaps。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。