Question

3．根据以下提示，请以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇短文，从良好的生活习惯，适当的体育锻炼及健康的饮食习惯等方面，为那些生活习惯欠佳、缺乏锻炼的朋友提出良好的建议（要求意思连贯、表达准确，词数为80词左右）
参考词汇：熬夜（stay up）、垃圾食品（junk food）、挑剔（be particular about）、定时定量（have meals regularly）
How to keep healthy
　　Health is very important for everybody．Then how can we do to keep healthy？You can try the following tips：
（良好的生活习惯和饮食习惯）First，you should have healthy life and eating habits．You shouldn’t stay up．You should eat more vegetables and fruit．Don’t eat junk food．You'd better have meals regularly．Don’t drink coffee too much，it’s bad for you．
（体育锻炼）Second，you can play sports．Sports can make you stronger and healthier．You can play baketball with your friends when you are free．You can go to the mouuntains with your family．
（愉快的心情）Third，Be happy．A happy man lives longer than a sad man．So sing a song or watch a fun movie．You can do anything to mak e you happy．
（其他建议）At last，stay away from smoking and drinking．Smoking and drinking are too bad for men．They can cause terrible illness．
If you do these things，I believe you can be a healthy man．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题作文．本文所给内容比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语从良好的生活习惯，适当的体育锻炼及健康的饮食习惯等方面以How to keep healthy为那些生活习惯欠佳、缺乏锻炼的朋友提出良好的建议．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态；由于是给别人提出建议，给出自己的观点，所以人称主要为第二人称you．注意说话的语气及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，可用短语first，second，third，at last，should，You’d better等．

解答 答案：
　　　　　How to keep healthy
　　Health is very important for everybody．Then how can we do to keep healthy？You can try the following tips：
（良好的生活习惯和饮食习惯）First，you should have healthy life and eating habits．You shouldn’t stay up．You should eat more vegetables and fruit．Don’t eat junk food．You'd better have meals regularly．Don’t drink coffee too much，it’s bad for you．
（体育锻炼）Second，you can play sports．Sports can make you stronger and healthier．You can play baketball with your friends when you are free．You can go to the mouuntains with your family．
（愉快的心情）Third，Be happy．A happy man lives longer than a sad man．So sing a song or watch a fun movie．You can do anything to mak e you happy．
（其他建议）At last，stay away from smoking and drinking．Smoking and drinking are too bad for men．They can cause terrible illness．
If you do these things，I believe you can be a healthy man．

点评 在写作中要注意层次紧凑，开始有总说，最后一段总结，中间分要点分别说明题中给出的要点．用first，second，third，at last显得层次鲜明，逻辑性很强．因为文章是提出建议，所以我们要用许多委婉的表达来给别人提出建议，如should，You’d better等．注意不要出现语法，词汇等的错误，不要出现汉语式的英语．