Question

书面表达 (15分)

题目：我理想的工作

要点：1. 想像你未来会从事什么职业；

2.为了实现未来的生活，你现在应该怎么做；

要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。

2. 80---100字。

My dream job

Answer 1

My Dream Job

I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. I like English because it is very interesting. I can learn many new words. Also, I can learn about other countries and their cultures. I think that widens my eyes and makes me rich in knowledge.

To make my dream come true, I must study hard now, especially in English. I am not good at listening and speaking. So I will practice speaking and listening more. I think I can improve them by watching English movies and listening to English tapes. Besides, I will join the English corner to improve my English.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以我理想的工作My Dream Job为题写一篇作文，写一写自己以后想要从事什么样的职业，以及如何实现这一理想。这是一篇开放性的作文，里面的具体内容需要我们自己补充完成，因此我们首先应该明确自己理想的工作是什么，并简单阐述理由。接下来再说明为了实现这一理想，现在需要怎么做。所以写作时最好将作文分成两段，以使得文章结构清晰，层次清楚。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。多使用我们学过的好的句型、句式、短语等，让整篇短文意思完整，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。作者将整篇文章分成了两段，第一段中作者先点明了自己理想的工作是什么，I want to be an English teacher when I grow up.，然后讲述了自己选择这一职业的原因，I like English because it is very interesting. I can learn many new words. Also, I can learn about other countries and their cultures. I think that widens my eyes and makes me rich in knowledge这几句话中主要使用了because引导原因状语从句、make的复合结构，单词also等。第二段中作者写的是为了实现理想，自己现在该怎么做。I must study hard now, especially in English.、So I will practice speaking and listening more、I can improve them by watching English movies and listening to English tapes.、Besides等短语和句型的使用比较好。

考点：话题类作文。