Question

【题目】 天行健，君子以自强不息。勇敢地面对和克服挫折，才会获得最终的成功。

初中三年，你一定遇到过很多困难，某英文报社以“自强”为话题展开征文活动，请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿，谈谈你曾经遇到过的困难，你是如何坚强克服困难的，以及克服困难后你的感受。

提示词语： remember, write, read, proud

提示问题： ● What difficulty did you have?

● What did you do to overcome the difficulty?

● How did you feel?

Everybody meets difficulties in their life.

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Everybody meets difficulties in their life. I have met different kinds of difficulties in the past three years. In the first year of middle school, I had big troubles remembering English words. I failed my test and I was really upset.

I decided to face my problem and find out ways to deal with it. First, I went to my English teacher for help. Then, I asked some classmates how they learned new words. They gave me some suggestions. I wrote the words on cards so I could see them any time and read them every day. Step by step, I made great progress.

The experience made me more confident in English. I was so proud of myself.

【解析】

提干阅读提干，这是一篇议论型文章。议论的是自己曾经遇到的困难，又是如何坚强克服困难的，及克服困难后的感受。这是对于初三学生的，一般困难都是在于学习上的，可以侧重考虑学习方面的，一般这类文章以一般过去时为主。

例文这是一篇优秀的文章，很好的完成了试题所给出的任务，文章的描述也符合英语语言语境。文章分为三部分，第一部分是提出遇到的困难是很难记住英语单词，第二部分是去解决这个问题，向老师寻求帮助，向同学请教方法，第三部分对于好方法的实施。文章中也有一些亮点词句，增强了前后文的逻辑关系，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

亮点词句：

短语：in the past three years在过去三年里；big trouble大麻烦；fail my test考试不及格；decide to do sth决定做某事；write the words写单词；

句型：（1）I decided to face my problem and find out ways to deal with it.我决定面对我的问题，并找出处理它的方法。decide to do sth决定做某事；deal with处理；（2）Step by step, I made great progress.一步一步，我取得了很大的进步。step by step一步一步。