Question

【题目】书面表达。

李莉生病住院了，病情严重，需要花很多钱。由于家庭困难不能支付医疗费用，同学们去医院看望她，后来有人提议给报社写一封信，请求社会的帮助，后来……

请以此为话题写一篇60词左右的短文。

要求：语法正确，语句连贯，字迹工整。

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Li Li is my classmate. She is in hospital now because she is badly ill. We went to the hospital to see her one day. She lay in bed with a sad look. Her doctor told us that her illness was very serious and she had to stay in hospital for a long time. But her family is poor. She has no money to pay for the medicine. We decided to do something. We wrote a letter to a newspaper and asked people to help her. With the help of the doctors, Li Li is getting better and better. She said thanks to us and said that she would study harder to catch up with us

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，讲述了李莉遇到了困难，我们写信给报社，向社会求助。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is……，Her doctor told us that……，She has……，Li Li is getting…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。