Question

近年来中国中学生中出现了“出国留学热”，成千上万的中学生已经去国外学习，而另外的一些学生也一直在设法出国，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面的提示，以Studying Abroad为题写一篇短文。

优点：1. 了解外国文化；2. ……

缺点：1. 出国费用高； 2. ……

注意：1. 短文须包括所有要点，内容连贯，可适当发挥；

2. 80词左右，开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with teenagers in China.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad. There are many advantages in studying abroad. First, students who study abroad can learn more about different cultures. Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. And the high cost is also a problem for common families. What do you think of this question?

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们就““出国留学热” 写一篇英语短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括两部分的内容。一是出国留学的优点， 如可以了解外国文化；二是出国留学的缺点，如出国费用高。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从优点与缺点两个方面客观阐述了出国留学的问题，层次清晰表达到位。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly. 等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如On the other hand, there are some disadvantages.等。

考点：提纲类作文。