Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。

信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫张华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自老师的情况，他想了解你最喜欢的老师。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：tall, big, friendly, be strict with, encourage

1）Which teacher do you like best in your school? English teacher? History teacher? Music teacher？Or…?

2）What does she/he look like?

3）Why do you like her/him?

Hi! Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you.______________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Zhang Hua

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

I like my English teacher best in my school. Her name is Mary. She is tall and has big eyes. She is very friendly and kind to me, but sometimes she is very strict with me. When I’m in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up.

She doesn’t give us too much homework either, in my eyes she is the most beautiful teacher in the world.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达关于学生的学习生活，谈谈自己最喜欢的老师。在写作时，学生应该介绍老师的性格外貌以及为什么喜欢这个老师的原因。学生也可以通过生活中的故事来说明原因。在表达时，可以运用各种从句和短语。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文行文流畅，语言运用娴熟。文章里使用了when引导的时间状语从句，还恰当使用大量的词组be strict with sb, encourage sb to do, cheer sb up等，同时使用了不少的连词:but, in my eyes衔接自然，为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。