题目内容
书面表达 (15 分)
为自己设计一个旅行计划,要包括下列问题:
1. 想去哪?为什么?
2. 想在那儿待几天?
3. 怎么去?为什么?
4. 打算什么时候开始旅行?独自一人还是与别人同去?
5. 在这次旅行期间,打算做些什么?
要求:意思连贯、通顺,词数在 60~80 之间。
A plan for a trip
1. I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good.The air there is fresh, and I can enjoy a quiet life. The food and vegetables are good, too.
2. I'm going to stay for a week.
3. I'll go by bike. In this way, I can take exercise as well.
4. I'll go tomorrow morning.
5. When I go, I'll take some school things, like books, pens, pencils and so on.
I decided to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study.
6. I think I'll be very tired but I'll enjoy myself.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇让我们自己制订旅游计划的小短文。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外,写作时,小作者还注意了语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good. I decided to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study. 有一些好的固定短语还有连词。
考点:提纲类作文。