Question

20．广州目前出现了灰霾天气（haze weather），我们的自然环境质量已经成为一个重要问题，假如你是Rose，是番禺区的一名初中生，请根据下面的提示向广州市环保局局长写一封以建设美丽广州为主题的倡议信．
1．原因：汽车和工厂排放有害的气体，部分树木被砍伐，污水被排入河里，大街上可见丢弃的垃圾．
2．严重性：污染的空气对人类的健康十分有害．
3．相应措施：我们应采取行动解决环境问题，保持环境干净，多种植树木，公众场合不允许吸烟．
4．你的一至两个建议．
注意：1．词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．
Dear Director，
I'm a junior student named Rose from Panyu District．
                                            
Sincerely yours，
Rose．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Therefore it's important to reduce the environmental pollution because they can lead to health problems．因此减少环境污染是很重要的，因为它们会导致健康问题．it is+形容词+to do sth句型
句型二：To make Guangzhou a beautiful city．使广州成为一个美丽的城市．不定式to make做目的状语．

解答 Dear Director，
      I'm a junior student named Rose from Panyu District．Recently，the haze weather appears in Guangzhou，the quality of our natural environment has become an important problem，environmental protection and building beautiful Guangzhou have become hot topics too．In Guangzhou，cars and factories produce harmful gases，some trees are cut down，dirty water is poured into the river，we can find rubbish in the street．The polluted air does great harm to people's health．Therefore it's important to reduce the environmental pollution because they can lead to health problems【高分句型一】．To make Guangzhou a beautiful city【高分句型二】，we should take actions to deal with our environmental problems，we should keep our environment clean and plant more trees．Also，smoking should not be allowed in public．In my opinion，calling on more and more people to pay attention to the environmental protection is important too．If we do the things above，Guangzhou will become more and more beautiful．
                                                                                                                        Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                 Rose．

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