Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

最近几十年，空气污染日趋严重。请针对这种现象，根据提示写一份调查报告，并提

出自己的治理建议。

最常见的空气污染源	1.工业：废气、烟尘等 2.交通：汽车和飞机等交通工具 3.生活污染源：吸烟、厨房的油烟等 4.……
我的建议	……

要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺。

2．短文必须包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥。

3．词数80词左右。开头己给出，不计入总词数。

The air pollution has been getting worse and worse. So recently I did a survey about the air pollution in my city .Here's my report.

Answer 1

【答案】

The air pollution has been getting worse and worse.So recently I did a survey about the air pollution in my city .Here's my report.

There are mainly four kinds of sources of the air pollution .The first one is from some factories that produce wastes ,another one is from vehicles ,such as cars,trucks,planes and buses,some of the gases which they produce remains in the air,the third one is from smoke that is from cooking in our kitchen and smoking,the fourth one is the bad smell in the air. I think we should do something to prevent and control air pollution.The government must make rules to prevent factories and vehicles from producing pollution, encourage people to plant more trees and grass and make some people smoke in some special areas.We students should keep away from smoking and do our best to protect air.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细：常见的空气污染原因及减少污染的建议。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如: 定语从句The first one is from some factories that produce wastes, keep away from，do our best to等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。