Question

Write at least fifty words on the topic “Changes in our life”.( 以“我们生活中的变化”为题, 写一段不少于50个单词的短文，标点符号不占格) 8%（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其其他相关信息，否则不予评分）

Suggested points:

Talk about some changes in your life. (At least 2 changes)

What do you think of these changes? Why?

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Changes in our Life

There have been many changes in our life. With the development of the economy, my life is better off. For the food I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal. Nowadays I can afford any delicious food including western foods. For the housing I have moved from a small room to a big and bright flat. My father used to ride an old bike to work a year ago. At present he drives his private car to travel. I believe our life will be better and better in the future.

I think it is because the development of science and technology that our life has changed so much.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以我们生活中的变化为题写一篇文章。根据题目的要求，我们要在短文中列举我们的生活都发生了哪些变化，学生们在写作时可以从我们日常生活的小事上想想。如吃饭、穿衣、交通工具等。过去我们是什么样的，现在又是什么样的。通过这个对比的描写，展现出生活中发生的变化。按照题目的要求，我们要至少举两个例子来说明。另外，在短文里，我们还要说明，我们的生活发生这些变化的原因。如科技的发展、我们国家的好的政策等。写作时要注意层次清楚，结构完整。多使用好的句型、句式，增强文章的表现力。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作为。在这篇短文中，作者按照题目的要求，给我们讲述了我们生活中发生的变化。作者给我们举了一些例子来说明，如For the food I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal. Nowadays I can afford any delicious food including western foods. For the housing I have moved from a small room to a big and bright flat. My father used to ride an old bike to work a year ago. At present he drives his private car to travel.，这里涉及了吃、住和行三个方面。这几句话构成了文章的主体，里面用到的好的短语和句型如afford、including、used to do sth.、at present 等。最后作者用一句话讲述了发生这些变化的原因，这个句子还用到了强调句型，是一个非常好的句式。

考点：提纲类作文。