Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇标题为“My teacher,Miss Kelly”的短文，描述你的老师。

My teacher,Miss Kelly

Tall,pretty and bright,

Always encourages us to try.

She leads us to a world of“why”,

We all love her from inside.

写作要求：

1.不得照抄短诗原文，并结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。

2.必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。

3.短文不能写成诗歌形式。

4.词数：80左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Miss Kelly is my English teacher. Of all my teachers, she is one of the best, because she is tall, pretty and bright. She often pays more attention to her way of teaching. She tries different ways to make her classes lively and interesting. In her opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, she never just gives us answers immediately, but encourages us to think by ourselves. With her help, we’ve learned how to solve problems. What a wonderful world of “why” she leads us to!

She is such a great person that we all love her from inside of our hearts.

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如Of all my teachers，one of the best，pay more attention to，her way of teaching，in her opinion，not only…but also，encourage sb. to think，by ourselves，with her help，how to solve problems，such…that，from inside of our hearts等。同时Of all my teachers, she is one of the best, because she is tall, pretty and bright. / With her help, we’ve learned how to solve problems./ She is such a great person that we all love her from inside of our hearts.等多种复杂句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。