Question

8．同学们，在你们成长的过程中，想到过母亲的付出吗？请写一篇90词左右的小短文．
1．简单介绍描述母亲
2．母亲为你做的一件事 
3．你的感受．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．无论我学习上需要什么她都给我买，尽管她没有多少钱．
 whatever 引导名词性从句．even though 尽管
【高分句型二】
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．我会攒钱买漂亮的衣服让她看起来年轻．
动词不定式表目的，make her look+形容词，使她看起来怎么样．

解答 My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．（外貌）She is friendly．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（爱好）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（母亲为我做的事情）Mother love is great and disinterested．We should be grateful to our mothers．（感受）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（愿望）

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