题目内容
4．课外活动可以让我们增长知识，发展智力，开阔视野和塑造性格．许多学校创造性地开展了课外活动，如朗诵、唱歌、讲故事、演话剧、办刊物以及举办各种体育活动等．最近，某中学生英文报开设了"After-class Activities"的栏目．请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动．
1．你校开展课外活动的情况；
2．你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；
3．为同学选择课外活动或为学校开设课外活动提出建议．
注意：1．词数80以上；
2．文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名；
3．稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）．
提示词：take part in sports interesting favourite
After-class Activities
Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools．
分析 本篇是一篇提纲作文，写作时要抓住文章的要点，先写清楚学校开展的课外活动，再写清楚给你带来的好处，最后写上为同学选择课外活动以及提出的建议；用第一人称来写，时态用一般现在时态，写作时做到句意通顺、意思连贯．
解答 After-class Activities
Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools．In our school there are various kinds of activities，for example，arts and sports．We enjoy them very much．Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good．Besides building my body and improving my skills，they also free me from the heavy work of study．Here I have some suggestions．To students，we'd better choose the activities which interest us and suit us； Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework．
Dear friends，please actively take part in after-activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve your learning．
点评 提纲作文写作时要抓住要点，紧扣After-class Activities这一主题，把文章中提示的要点以及关键词用上，注意提建议的句型如：Here I have some suggestions；Why don't you…；Why not…等等，语法正确，书写工整，过渡自然．
