Question

【题目】书面表达

请你以My friend为题，用英语写一篇短文。

要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥，字数80词左右。

要点：1．两年前，他/她学习不努力，喜欢玩电脑游戏，看电视，成绩差，父母担心。2．现在，成为好学生，擅长数学和英语，喜欢看书和听音乐，深得师生喜爱。3．将来，想当一名...， 理由是…（自由发挥两到三点）

My friend

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend. Her name is Wang Peng. Two years ago she didn’t study hard. She was good at playing computer games. She always watched TV at night. She did badly in her schoolwork. Her parents were worried about her.

With the help of her teacher and classmates， she has improved a lot. She is good at math and physics. She likes reading and listening to music. We all like her.

She wants to be a teacher in the future. First English is becoming more and more useful and important. She also like children. Being an English teacher is exciting too. I hope she can be a good teacher.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文，所给的内容比较详细。因为是介绍朋友的过去，现在及将来的打算，所以主语用第三人称单数，时态根据需要用到一般现在时，一般过去时态及将来时。在书写时，尽量词语连贯正确，语言流畅。要运用自己有把握的句型，不可硬用自己没有把握的句型。

写作亮点：本文由于所给的内容比较详细，一些句型我们都学已经学过，不会犯太多的错误，写起来也就比较简单点。这篇书面表达句型运用正确，层次分明，且语句之间较为连贯。在自我发挥的地方内容完整有条理，可圈可点。