题目内容
【题目】书面表达(本大题共10分)
假设你是周杰伦的粉丝,请根据所给信息写一篇有关他的短文。内容提示如下:
1. 我最喜欢的明星是周杰伦(Jay Chou), 他1979年1月18日出生于台湾,他和昆凌结婚有四个多月了。
2. 他很有音乐天赋,钢琴弹得很好。
3. 他认为古典音乐具有永恒价值,也擅长西方乐器。 他成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。
4. 他的成就不局限于音乐界。在2005年,他还在电影《头文字D》(Initial D)中担任主角。
5. 我相信……
注意:短文必须包括所给要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
1. 第5点必须用一至二句话展开合理想象;
2. 词数90个左右。
My favourite star is Jay Chou.
【答案】
My favourite star is Jay Chou. He was born in TaiWan on 18 January,1979. He has been married to KunLing for over four months. He has a real gift\talent for music. He plays the piano well. He thinks classical music has a lasting value. He is good at playing western musical instruments. He has successfully brought traditional music and modern music together. His achievements go (have gone) beyond the music industry. In 2005 ,he also played the lead role in the film
Initial D .I believe he will be a world-famous star one day. And I should learn from him.
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文为话题类作文,要求介绍周杰伦。写作要点已经列出,要求明确,故要完成写作任务,务必把各要点表达清楚。
写作亮点:本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务,要点全面,结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动,例如He was born in TaiWan on 18 January,1979. He has been married to KunLing for over four months. He plays the piano well.宾语从句I believe he will be a world-famous star one day.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之,该文是一篇不错的短文。