Question

我市在争创文明城市(civilized city)，作为中学生，你该如何做呢？校学生会正举行以“How To Be a Civilized Student”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇100词左右的短文参赛。

to be a civilized student	be polite …
respect our teachers and classmates…
help others …
obey traffic rules…
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How To Be a Civilized Student

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Answer 1

One possible version:

As we all know, our city is creating a civilized city. As students, we should try to be civilized students. What should we do?

First of all, it’s very important for us to know what to do and what not to do. In school, we should respect our teachers and classmates. We must go to school on time and we shouldn't be late for class. In class, we should listen to the teachers carefully. Also, we’re supposed to be friendly to others and offer help to a person in trouble. It’s our duty to follow the traffic rules and not to litter to keep our city clean. Besides, don’t forget to keep low voice in public places.

In a word, if we follow all the rules, our city will be more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式为文章增色不少.如It’s very important for us to know what to do and what not to do我们知道做什么和不该做什么是非常重要的。We’re supposed to be friendly to others and offer help to a person in trouble. 我们应该对别人友好和帮助有困难的人。另外First of all、Also、 Besides的使用使得文章非常条理。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。