Question

6．假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问，请你根据下表提示的信息，用英语向外宾简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想．

环境及设施	过去	现在
	至少列举两例说明过去情况	操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品种多； 树木四季常青，学校美如花园…
你的感想	…

注意：
1．词数不少于90．文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．
2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯．
3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．
Ladies and gentlemen!It's my honor to tell you about the changes to our school．
In the past，there was only a small playground．The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them．The number of the trees and flowers was small．
But things have greatly changed these years．Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts．More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round．
I think it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．We will work harder and serve the people better in the future．
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school．Thank you very much!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是向外宾简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1环境及设施：1）过去：至少列举两例说明过去情况 2）现在：操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品种多；树木四季常青，学校美如花园…
2你的感想
常用到的重点短语：
there be 有
the number of  …的数量
as…as 与…一样
all year around 整年
【高分句型】
1．More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．
can be lent 情态动词的被动语态--情态动词+be+过去分词，lend sth to sb 把某物借给某人．
2．Our school is①as beautiful as a garden ②with lots of green trees ③all year round．
①as…as 与…一样，中间用形容词或副词的原形．
②with短语表伴随．
③all year around 整年
3．I think①②it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．
①think后接上省略了that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+of sb+to do sth某人做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen!It's my honor to tell you about the changes to our school．
In the past，there was only a small playground．The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them．The number of the trees and flowers was small．（过去的状况）
But things have greatly changed these years．Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts．（操场更大、篮球场更多）More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．【高分句型】（图书新、品种多）Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round．【高分句型】（树木四季常青，学校美如花园）
I think it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．【高分句型】We will work harder and serve the people better in the future．（我的感想）
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school．Thank you very much!

点评 学生写作时，如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚的水准上，只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么，这样写出来的文章就会像一碗白开水，呆板、单调，没有可读性．要使文章耐人寻味、有深度，同学们就应尝试使用一些高级词汇或句型，以凸显文章的亮点，使文章增添文采，