题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。
你的理想是什么? | I want to… |
为什么选择这个理想? | be interested in; … |
你打算怎样去实现它? (achieve one's dream) | work hard at school; learn from successful people; … |
注意:1.短文必须包括三部分内容。
2.表中右栏信息仅供参考,也可自由发挥。
3.词数:70左右。
【答案】
My dream
Everyone has his dreams. I also have my own dream. I want to be a teacher. I am interested in learning English. So I want to help others learn English better. I also like children. To realize my dream, I must work hard at school. Of course, I must learn English well. I can learn from successful people and gain some experience. During summer vacation, I want to find a part-time job to improve my ability.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们介绍自己的梦想,首先要确定自己的梦想是什么;其次讲清楚选择这个理想的原因;最后是讲清楚为了实现梦想自己打算如何去做。这三部分的内容都要包括在内,不要遗漏要点。通过分析可知,这篇作文我们应使用一般现在时或者是be going to结构。写作时,要注意每句话中动词形式的变化,句子表达要符合英语的规范,不要写汉语式的英语。还应使用一些好的短语和句型,增强文章的表现力,使文意连贯和流畅。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者介绍了自己的梦想是什么,并且讲述了选择这个梦想的原因以及为了实现梦想,自己的打算。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称,短文层次清楚,内容完整,叙述的原因也很合乎情理。另外,短文中还使用了一些好的句型,如I am interested in learning English. So I want to help others learn English better、To realize my dream, I must work hard at school、I can learn from successful people and gain some experience、During summer vacation, I want to find a part-time job to improve my ability等。
【题目】A: Hi, Eric, how do you go to work every day?
B: I used to go to work by bike, but now I have to go by train.
A: 【1】
B: Because my company(公司)has moved to another city. Now everything has changed.
A: Yes, it may be a long way to get to work. 【2】
B: I have to get up at 5:30 every morning.
A: Oh, so early! 【3】
B: At least one and a half hours.
A: It's a long trip. 【4】
B: That's a good idea. I do sleep during the trip, or I will be sleepy all the morning.
A: 【5】
B: Yes. Sometimes I can't get home until 9:00 p.m.
A: Then you must be very tired after getting home.
B: You're right.
A. What time did you get up? B. Do you get home late sometimes? C. Can you take a bus? D. When do you have to get up every morning? E. Why not make up some sleep in the train? F. How long does it take you to get there by train? G. Why do you have to go by train? |