题目内容
课余时光是我们忙碌学习生活的凋节剂。你是如支配自己闲暇时间的呢?看电视、体育运动、听音乐、阅读书报、郊游、帮父母做家务,还是……
请你以“My Free Time”为题。描述一下自己的课余生活及感想。注意:1.文章要条理清晰,书写规范工整,标点符号正确。词数80个左右。
2.不得写出自己和学校的真实名称。3.开头已写好。请你接着往下写。
My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my free time.
My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school.I like basketball and volleyball very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.Sometimes I listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself.Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking.Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends.We always have a good time!
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者写对父母的感恩,列举了父母对他的关心与爱。全文主要用一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语为文章增色不少,例如take exercise ,after school,do some reading,listen to,for a while,Of course,help with,at the weekends,have a good time等短语,文章层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。
考点:提纲作文