Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你和王翔是同班同学，请根据下表所提供的信息，以My Good Friend为题写一篇60个词左右的短文，向你的朋友介绍一下王翔。所提供的信息尽量用上。

Name	Wang Xiang (a student)
From	Guangdong, China
Age	14
Look	tall, round face, big eyes
Family	father (an office worker), mother (a nurse)
Favorite food	chicken
dinner	rice, fish and vegetables

Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. His name is Wang Xiang. Wang Xiang is a student and he comes from Guangdong, China. He is 14 years old. He looks (very) tall; he has a round face and big eyes. His father is an office worker and his mother is a nurse. His favorite food is chicken. He often has rice, fish and vegetables for dinner.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的好朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称单数，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is …， His father is ...及He usually has 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍他的家人，最后介绍他喜欢的食物。此处用了 with a round face， favorite food，has rice 等这些词组的运用也让文章内容更加丰富。