Question

17．Complete the title"I learned to be/do                      after the failure"and write a composition about it in at least 60words．

Answer 1

分析 此作文要求写一篇提纲作文．题目为：learned to be/do                      after the failure．动笔前应把题目补充完整，先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．可以包含这些要点：①考试后感觉怎么样；②以后怎么办．句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．
1．高分句型：I felt very surprised and sad when I was told that I had failed to pass an exam last Friday当我被告知上星期五我没有通过考试时，我感到非常惊讶和伤心．这是when引导的时间状语从句，从句中用的是被动语态 I was told．
2．高分句型：I have learned that I won't be successful unless I do my best我知道我不会成功，除非我尽我最大的努力，首先这是that引导的宾语从句，然后宾语从句中又有一个unless引导的条件状语从句．

解答 I  learned to study harder after the failure
  I felt very surprised and sad when I was told that I had failed to pass an exam last Friday【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】．It gave me a serious attack．【要点一】But after that I didn't give up．I studied much harder than before．I asked teachers for help as soon as I had any problem．Then I was successful in the next exam．As an old saying goes，"No pain，no gain．"I have learned that I won't be successful unless I do my best【高分句型一，注意宾语从句，状语从句的使用】．【要点二】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．