Question

【题目】书面表达
你在学校的课外活动一定很丰富吧。请描述一下你的同学们在操场上玩的情况吧！ 60词左右。
提示：play basketball, play football, run, play games
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Answer 1

【答案】It's four thirty in the afternoon. School is over. There are many students on the playground. Look! Some boys are playing basketball; they are trying to get the ball. Some girls are watching. Some students are playing football. There is also a teacher on the playground. He is watching the students playing football. Two short boys are running after two tall boys. They want to know who runs the fastest. We can also see some girls. They are playing games. They are happy.
【解析】第一，审题：由题目要求：你在学校的课外活动一定很丰富吧，请描述一下你的同学们在操场上玩的情况吧。可知写作中使用的时态是现在进行时：be +现在分词 (动词的ing形式)。写作中应注意助动词的使用，单数is ,复数are .以及要注意 现在分词的正确拼写。第二，列举写作要点：①It's four thirty.(介绍一下课外活动的时间，是在下午放学后)；②There are many students on the playground (介绍课外活动的地点)；③some students are ving,and some students are ving .(分别介绍一下同学们正在进行的运动)；④ They are happy.或They are having a good time .(总结同学们的课外活动情况)。第三，例举重点短，It's …; on the playground ;play football ; play basketball ; run;play games;have a good time ;happy