Question

【题目】书面表达。

升入中学已经两年多了，回顾过去的两年，你对谁最感激(grateful)呢？请你以Thank you, ×××为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。短文必须围绕以下提示展开：

1. Who is the person?

2. What has he/she done for you? Please give one or two examples.

3. What have you learnt from him/her?

4.What do you think of him/her?

Thank you,_________________

Answer 1

【答案】Thank you, Mum

Dear Mum,

I’d like to say thank you for what you have done for me.

You not only look after me well but also do whatever you can to help me get out of trouble. When I was in Grade 7, I was weak in English. I felt hopeless. It was you who offered me so much support and made me feel confident. You gave me valuable advice and spent a great deal of time helping me practice English. With your help, I improved my English quickly. What’s more, I realized that nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

Thank you, Mum.

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如not only…but also…，look after me well，get out of trouble，so much，a great deal of time，with your help等。而You not only look after me well but also do whatever you can to help me get out of trouble./ It was you who offered me so much support and made me feel confident./ What’s more, I realized that nothing is impossible for a willing heart.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。