Question

13．现在．我国靑少年中出现了越来越多的"小胖墩"，他们的肥胖影响到了他们的生活和学习．请你根据以下提示，以"Advice on keeping away from overweight（超重）"为题写一篇短 文，从良好的生活方式和健康的饮食习惯等方面为这些"小胖墩"支招，让他们远离肥胖，健康生活．
可供选用的词汇：
get up early； do not stay up too late； more exercise； stop eating junk food； not too much salt
oil or sugar； eat some fruit and vegetables； have breakfast every morning；…
要求：意思连贳，表达准确，可适当拓展.60-80个单词．
注意：文章开头已给山．不计入总词数．
Advice on keeping away from overweight
        In China，more and more teenagers are getting fatter and fatter．If you don't want to be very fat，you ___________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You'd better have breakfast every morning你最好每天早上吃早饭．
had better do sth 最好做某事
【高分句型二】
I'm sure the advice can help you keep away from overweight我确定这建议能帮你远离肥胖．
be sure+that从句，that可以省略，表示确定…

解答 Advice on keeping away from overweight
In China，more and more teenagers are getting fatter and fatter．If you don't want to be very fat，you should go to bed early and get up early．Don't stay up too late．You should do more exercise．（生活方式）Stop eating junk food．It's bad for you．And you shouldn't eat food with too much salt，oil or sugar．Also you should eat more fruit and vegetables．Don't forget breakfast．You'd better have breakfast every morning．【高分句型一】（饮食习惯）It's very important for you．I'm sure the advice can help you keep away from overweight．【高分句型二】

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．