Question

12．假如你叫Simon，你最近对你班的30名男生和30名女生进行了上网目的调查．请用英语给China Daily的编辑写一封信，说明调查结果，引起大家重视．
    注意：1．词数为60-80词．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；2．文章应包括表
格表示的全部内容；3．叙述调查结果时避免重复使用百分比；4．叙述过程适当添加评语．
    调查结果：

80%boys and girls	Search for some useful infortition
50%boys/60%girls	Read news
40%boys/90%girls	chat
30%boys/30%girls	Syudy English
90%boys/20%girls	Play games

Dear Editor，
     I have recently carried out a survey among the 30 boys and 30 girls in my class to find out what they use the Intemet for．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             
                                                                         This is the result of my survey．
                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                   Simon．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Maybe they think it's the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends也许他们认为这是获得信息或者和朋友保持联系的最便利的方式．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．

【高分句型二】
I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time我也希望父母会足够的关注他们的孩子空闲时间使用电脑．
hope后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 Dear editor，
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet．
The girls'favorite is chatting，but few boys like it．What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it．Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet．Maybe they think it's the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends．【高分句型一】As for studying，the numbers of boys and girls are equal，but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study．（调查结果）
In my opinion，the students had better make better and wise use of it．Otherwise，it's impossible for us to benefit from it．Moreover，I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time．【高分句型二】（ 我的看法）
  Yours，
Simon．

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．