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今天你在网上看到了一张贴子。请根据帖子的内容给予回复。（字数：80左右）

Post: Who can help me? Posted by a worried mother on 12 / 05/ 09 Can you help me? My son, Tony is a 14-year-old boy. He used to be a good student in his class. But recently he changes. He doesn’t put his heart in his lessons, he is often sleepy in class and sometimes he can’t hand in his homework on time. His teacher called me and asked why. Several days ago, I followed him secretly when he walked out of the school. He went into a net bar directly. At home he still plays on the computer very late. And he is very angry with me when I talk about his behavior with him. What should I do? How can I draw him back into his lessons? A worried mother

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Madam,

I'm sorry to know that you have so much trouble with your son, and I don't think he should always play computer games. But don't worry. You can ask his teacher for help or you can invite some of his friends to have a word with him. You'd better encourage him to find out that spending too much time on computer games is bad for his health and studies. Try to encourage him to do other things instead of playing computer games. What's more, as his mother, you should learn something about computer games so that you and your son may have something to talk about. Besides, you may find some topics that your son is interested in, and then he may talk with you. Don't lose heart. It will be all right.

a friend

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用英语给材料作文。要求介绍根据一个母亲对儿子的担心恢复一封信，给出合理的建议。写作时要根据母亲的描述，进行建议。首先表示自己对这件事的看法，然后再给出建议。

【亮点说明】这篇短文首先表示自己对这件事的看法，然后层层递进的给出了建议。短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。给建议的句式变化多样，如：You can ask ..Don't lose heart …You'd better …等。适当的连词的应用也给文章增色，如：What's more, Besides,等。

考点：话题作文。