Question

请根据以下内容给你的妈妈发信，介绍你的好朋友Tom一天的生活和做每件事的感受或看法。

In the morning	Time	Activities
6: 30	get up, run
7:30	Go to school,have classes
In the afternoon	4:30	Join the basketball club
5:00	Go home, do homework
In the evening	7:00	Have dinner, play the violin
	10:00	Go to bed

 

Answer 1

Tom’s Day

My friend is Tom.He gets up at 6: 30.And then he always runs.After that he has a shower and has a quick breakfast.At 7:30 he goes to school by bike.At 8;00,he has classes at school. Because he joins the basketball club,he often plays basketball at 4:30 in the afternoon with his friends .When he gets home at 5:00,he starts to do his homework.At 7:00 in the evening he has dinner.After dinner,he always plays the violin.At 10:00 he goes to bed.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是以表格的形式，把要写的内容一一列出，需要学生能够读懂表格，注意这里向妈妈介绍朋友Tom 的情况，所以一定要注意主语应该用第三人称单数，谓语动词也应该用单数，注意主谓一致。为了使短文读起来流畅，要使用一些过渡的短语或句子。

【亮点说明】短文运用了一些短语和句式，如：He gets up at 6: 30.And then he always runs. At 7:30 he goes to school by bike. When he gets home at 5:00,he starts to do his homework.等，文中也用了一些连词如：because，when等。使句子结构更加复杂。

考点：提纲作文。