Question

10．你班上周举行了关于是否缩短寒暑假并增加春秋假的讨论，同学们各抒己见．请你根据下表中的讨论记录，结合你自己对此事的看法，用英语给校报写一篇短文．

赞成	=1、目前学期长而枯燥，学生无法充分休息 =2、春秋两季风景优美，学生可以感受自然
反对	=1、一年分成四个学期，影响学习效果 =2、作业可能因此变多，家中学习压力
你的观点	…（至少一点）

注意：1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称
2）结构完整，语言通顺，意思清楚，连贯，书写规范
3）词数不少于90．文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
We had a discussion about whether to shorten the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays lat week．Opinions are different．
Some students thinkthat the terms are long and boring at present and students can't get enough rest．Spring and autumn have beautiful views．If the spring and autumn holidays are added，students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature．
Some students think if we add the spring and autumn holidays，a year will be divided into four terms and it will have bad effect on teaching and learning．If so，students may have more homework to do and get more pressure to face．
I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays，but we need more holidays without too much homework．It will be better for students to have more time for their hobbies．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：If the spring and autumn holidays are added，students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature如果加上春秋假期，学生会有更多机会去感受大自然的美丽．这是由if引导的条件状语从句，时态遵循主将从现．从句中主语是the spring and autumn holidays，动作的承受者，因此用被动语态，be动词+done，一般现在时态，主语是复数用are，add的过去分词是added．
句型二：I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays我认为我们不需要增加春秋假期．这是一个宾语从句．在宾语从句中如果主句是I think，从句的否定词一般要转移到主句上来，即I don't think…从句的时态要结合语境选择合适用法．need to do sth需要做某事．

解答 that the terms are long and boring at present and students can't get enough rest．（表明观点） Spring and autumn have beautiful views．If the spring and autumn holidays are added，students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature【高分句型一】（说明原因）．
Some students think if we add the spring and autumn holidays，a year will be divided into four terms and it will have bad effect on teaching and learning（另一些学生的观点）．If so，students may have more homework to do and get more pressure to face（说明原因）．
I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays【高分句型二】（我的观点），but we need more holidays without too much homework．It will be better for students to have more time for their hobbies（我的原因）．

点评 写作时要明确要点，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，语法正确，结合要求，注意作文题材，不要写跑题．日常积累一些短语和词句．