题目内容
【题目】现代人的生活压力都很大,所以人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力,请围绕下列内容写一篇短文:
1.的人喜欢独自旅游,有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行.
2.种旅游方式的好处.
3.更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么?
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名.
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右.
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【答案】Now more and more people like traveling around the world. Because that can make them relax.
When it comes to traveling ways, different people will offer different opinions. Some like to travel alone, but some like to travel with their friends or parents. I think traveling alone is good for enjoying more freedom. And I think traveling with others who have the same interest can share something happy with others.
As for me, I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone. Because we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. If you would like to travel, with Wish you to have a great trip!
【解析】试题分析:本次作文为话题类作文,话题是旅游。认真阅读提示:1.人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力;2.有的人喜欢独自旅游,有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行;3. 各种旅游方式的好处;4. 你更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么?动笔前要认真思考,列好提纲,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,字数在80左右,不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。写完以后,再读一遍,检查是否有写和语法错误,语言是否通顺,要点是否齐全,条理是否清楚。
【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范,表达清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语言通顺,要点齐全,字数符合要求,没有拼写和语法错误,上下文意思连贯,条理清楚。