Question

4．

Dear Mike， I am going to London this summer．But I know little about London．So I'd like to ask you for help．I wonder how British students behave in public．What is British school life like？Are there any good places to go？ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours， Simon

参考词汇：Tower Bridge，Big Ben，British Museum；
要求：1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．词数80左右．邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Simon，
I am happy to know that you will come to London，and I'd like to help you know more about it．
                                              
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
People that traveled to London all thought of the Big Ben．到英国旅行的人都会想到大本钟．
that引导的定语从句的应用
【高分句型二】
I think it is the best choice for a student who is looking for high quality education．我认为对于一个寻求优质教育的学生来说，它是最好的选择．
I think+宾语从句的应用；who引导的定语从句的应用；the best choice最好的选择

解答 Dear Simon，
I am happy to know that you will come to London，and I'd like to help you know more about it．（引起下文）
London is the capital of England．It is located in the southeast of England．It has many interesting buildings and places．The Big Ben is a symbol of London．It is huge and heavy 13.5 tons．People that traveled to London all thought of the Big Ben．【高分句型一】It is standing in the London Bridge to enjoy this unique architecture．Beside，there are many other important buildings such as British Museum and Tower Bridge．They are also good places to visit．（伦敦的概况和名胜）
British has the best education industry in the world．Lots of famous universities，such as Oxford，University of London，are attracted lots of students from all over the world to study in Great Britain．I think it is the best choice for a student who is looking for high quality education．【高分句型二】British students are very polite in public and friendly to others．What's more，the life in the school is wonderful because there are many interesting activities．（英国教育和校园生活）
Yours，
Mike．

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．