Question

【题目】母爱很伟大，但父爱如山。大多数同学在母亲节时常送礼物给妈妈表示感恩，有些同学却不知道在父亲节时送什么礼物给爸爸。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。
提示：1）如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些实用但不贵的东西，如领带等：
2）还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准 备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
要求：1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2）语句连贯词数80个左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数
Next Father's Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
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Answer 1

【答案】参考例文：
Father's Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don't have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father's Day. Don't you think so?
【解析】因为有些同学不知道在父亲节时送什么礼物给爸爸，短文向同学们提出一些建议。因为父亲节还没有来到，所以提出建议的句子应该用一般将来时，句子的主语用第二人称。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：give a present to sb给某人一个礼物；come back from work下班回来；make sb +形容词“使某人怎样”。用了if引导的条件状语从句，that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句，No matter what引导的让步状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。