Question

【题目】随着互联网和科技的发展，手机的功能越来越强大。然而，对手机的过度依赖却成了社会的一种普遍现象。请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。

过度依赖手机的现象	1.熬夜玩手机； 2.作业不会查手机； 3.过马路看手机；
可能导致的危害	1.睡眠不足.……； 2.课上不必认真听讲……； 3.……
你的看法和建议	……

注意事项：1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.根据情况作适当发挥；3.90个词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
With the development of the Internet and technology, many people are depending too much on their mobile phones.

Answer 1

【答案】 The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems. First of all, some students stay up late using the smart-phone. Some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. Some use the smart phone when they crossing the street. As we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and Wechat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. They can't listen to teachers in class carefully. In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。写作要求：过度依赖手机的现象。熬夜玩手机；作业不会查手机；过马路看手机；可能导致的危害，睡眠不足.……；课上不必认真听讲…本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。