Question

【题目】书面表达(共20分) XI.书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）

Lin Fen 在学习英语的过程中遇到了一些困难：

1、不能正确地读一些单词；

2、记不住生词，而且总是写错单词；

3、和外教谈话时听不懂。

请你根据以上提示给她提一些建议。

要求：语义连贯，条理清楚，包含要点。字数80-100词。书信格式已给出。

Answer 1

【答案】

I was happy to know your trouble about learning English. You asked me for some advice on learning English. At first, I also found it hard to remember so many words and phrases. Then I found that the best way to remember words was to learn their pronunciation. There are some useful rules in the pronunciation, and they can help me remember new words easily. I also had some grammar problems when I was in first grade. I tried to read more and practice more. Now it isn't very difficult for me to understand the sentences and passages. That's my secret of learning English. I hope it helps you. Please never give up!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让我们给林芬提一些英语学习的建议。作者主要从自身学习英语中所遇见的一些问题，提了一些宝贵意见。另外，写作时，还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者讲述了在自己过去学习英语和现在的情况。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如hen I found that the best way to remember words was to learn their pronunciation. Now it isn't very difficult for me to understand the sentences and passages等。