Question

13．在我们周围经常存在安全隐患，所以我们应该对安全你引起足够的重视请以The safety around us为题，写一篇英语短文，说说我们身边的安全问题，内容包括：

At home	be careful with，turn off，power supply，gass holder
On the road	obey the traffic rules，not ride side by side，not listen to music
At school	not push the others on the stairs，if…accident，call 120，do some basic medical training…

要求：1．中文应包括以上信息，可适当发挥，行文连贯，书写规范．
2．文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名，地名或校名等．
3．文章字数在80-100之间，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数
The safety around usSafety is very important for us students．Accidents often happen around us．So we must pay much attention to safety．At home，we should                       
If we can do all these well，we'll enjoy our life better．

Answer 1

分析 本篇话题作文要求以我们周围的安全为话题，我们可以从三个方面：在家里，在路上，在学校，根据表格所给的信息适当增加内容．本篇是说明文，可以根据表格地点的先后顺边叙述边说明安全的重要性．
高分句型：
1．可以使用if 引导条件状语从句，如：It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on．
2．使用It is+adj．for sb．to do sth 句型，如：It is nessary for us to d some basic medical training for unexpected needs．

解答 答案：be careful with fire and electricity．Make sure power supply and gas holder are turned off before you leave home．It will be very dangerous if you leave the gas on!On the road，we should always abey the traffic rules．We mustn't listen to music but pay full attention to the condition of roads．Besides，and we'd better not ride side by side．At school，we shouldn't push the others on the stairs when going up and down．If unfornately，there is an accident，call 120 as soon as possible．
  Thus，it is necessary for us to do some basic medical training for unexpected needs．In short，safety must come first．

点评 话题作文注意根据文章要点，有条理地进行叙述，注意写后检查是否有部分语法错误．