Question

【题目】书面表达（10分）

在初三班会课上，老师要求同学们就“暑期外出安全”话题展开小组讨论。以下表格内容是你所在小组讨论后提出的建议，请根据该内容，以“How to Keep Safe in the Summer Vacation”为题，写一篇英语短文。

交通	不在马路上踢球，过马路要当心
食品	不吃不干净食品，尽量少喝冷饮
游泳	不要独自去游泳，到游泳池游泳
求助	有危险求助大众，或者及时报警

要求：1、短文要包含表格内所有的信息，可适当发挥。

2、短文中不能提及你的真实姓名和所在学校。

3、词数70左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Keep Safe in the Summer Vacation

We all know that it’s important for us teenagers to keep safe in the summer vacation. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of our suggestions.

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I hope the above suggestions can help you have a safe and happy summer vacation

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Safe in the Summer Vacation

We all know that it’s important for us teenagers to keep safe in the summer vacation. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of our suggestions.

First of all, You should obey the traffic rules. When you cross the road, you should first look at the left then the right. You mustn’t play football on the road. If we are careful enough, we can reduce the traffic accidents.

Second, you should be careful about the food that you eat.or drink. In summer , it is easer for food to go bad..So we must eat the fresh and clean food. And we should drink as little cold drink. as possible.

Third , don't go swimming alone. If there is something dangerous happening , he or she can do something to help you. If you want to go swimming , you must choose the swimming pool..

There is no doubt that keeping safe is important. But if we are in danger or we see dangerous things , we must ask people around for help or we can call the polic in time.

I hope the above suggestions can help you have a safe and happy summer vacation

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。所给的材料主要分四个方面：交通安全，食品安全，游泳安全及发生危险后怎么做。根据内容可知主要用一般现在时。因为是安全建议所以有可能会用到you should do /shouldn’t do …, you can…, you must/mustn’t do , don’t do 等表示建议的句式。在写作中注意连词的应用及上下文的衔接。

写作亮点：这篇短文分四个方面对假期安全做了建议。短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。用

到了you should do /shouldn’t do …， don’tdo, you must/mustn’t do等表示建议的句式。同时还用到了if 条

件状语从句，There is no doubt that等复合句。这写使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。