Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你们班要去儿童福利院做志愿活动，你打算邀请你的朋友—交换生

Peter参加。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他时间，交通方式，活动内容，以及需要准

备什么。

提示词语：bus，read，play games，songs，stones，gifts，help

提示问题：When and how are you going to the Children s Home?

What are you going to do there?

What do you advise Peter to prepare for the volunteer work?

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to join the volunteer work at the Children’s Home. We will go there on our school bus next Saturday.

When we are there, we are going to read books to the kids and play games with them. I think they will be very happy to see us. Besides, we are going to teach kids some English songs and help them with their spoken English. What’s more, we can tell them some English stories. I believe they will be interested because kids always love stories.

Before you come, you’d better prepare some books or small gifts for the children. I hope you can join us and give them a hand.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者邀请她的好朋友参加志愿者活动。在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如I think they will be very happy to see us. Besides, we are going to teach kids some English songs and help them with their spoken English. What’s more, we can tell them some English stories. I believe they will be interested because kids always love stories.等等。