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书面表达 （共12分）

为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以"安全为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；

2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3)词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad

How to keep safe?

As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

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Answer 1

How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some

of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first !

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.等，In short等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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