Question

【题目】书面表达学校将举行初中英语征文比赛，主题是介绍你的好朋友Nick。请你根据下列要点完成征文。具体内容如下：

1．就读于阳光中学八年级。大眼睛圆脸, 个子比我高得多.

2. 愿意替我保守秘密，是我的忠实朋友。擅长数学，经常帮同学辅导数学难题。

3. 他心目中的理想学校在早上8点开始上课，下午4点结束。每个月进行学校旅游一次。

4. 痴迷于DIY,喜欢修理东西，装饰房间。

5. 他妈妈的生日就要到了，他决定亲手为妈妈做一张生日卡片。

注意：

1. 要点齐全、语意连贯、语法正确、书写规范、适当发挥；

2. 词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My best friend

Nick is my best friend. __________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

Nick is my best friend. He studies in Sunshine Middle School. He has a round face with big eyes, and he is much taller than me. Nick is willing to keep secrets for me, he is my true friend. so I can tell him everything. He is good at math, He often helps classmates with hard math problems. His ideal school day starts at 8:00a.m. and finishes at about 4 p.m. it has a school trip once a month. Nick is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things and decorating the rooms. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decides to make a birthday card for her by himself.

How lucky I am to have such a good friend!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般现在时态，主语为第三人称单数，句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。本文结构紧凑 文中介绍了朋友很多的优点，最后引出在他母亲生日的时候他决定给母亲亲自制作一个卡片。He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with maths problems.；How lucky I am to have such a good friend！这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。