Question

写作：字数不少于40个词。(8分)

题目：My Ideal Room ( 我的理想房间)

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Ideal Room

My ideal (理想的) room is a place like a garden. I don't care about the size of the room. But I must be able to feel relaxed (放松的) when I'm there. The wall is blue. There is a white door in the room. Next to the door, it is a window. The window is white, too..There is a black bed beside the window because I like black. There is a large bookcase next to the bed and there are many books on it. I like this room.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，谈谈自己的理想中的房间。题目只给出了主要写作内容，故动笔前先要认真阅读题目，确定写作要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。结合所写内容，可知本文主要是用第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I don't care about the size of the room. Next to the door, it is a window. There is a large bookcase next to the bed and there are many books on it.等，用了一些连词如when,because等，是句子结构复杂了，增加了文章的亮点。

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