Question

【题目】书面表达(15分)

假如现在是晚上七点半，请你根据Tony提供的信息，写一篇短文以Tony的口吻描述一下Tony一家人此刻的活动情况。

要求：使用现在进行时，60词左右。

Father	Read a book
Mother	Clean the room
Grandfather	Watch TV
Tony	Do his homework
Nancy	Play the piano

Answer 1

【答案】

It’s 7:30 in the evening now.Tony’s family are doing different things. Look!Tony’s mother is cleaning the room. His father is reading a book on the sofa. His grandfather is watching TV.Tony is doing his homework. He has a sister. Her name is Nancy. What’s she doing? She is playing the piano. Everyone is busy in Tony’s family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定主要句式，关键单词等。结合所给材料可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行介绍，短文描写的是单数第三人称，故需要注意谓语动词用单数形式。注意叙述顺序，上下文之间符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Tony’s family are doing different things. His father is reading a book on the sofa.His grandfather is watching TV.Tony is doing his homework. She is playing the piano.等，为了上下文的衔接文章用了一些词和句子如：look！What’s she doing?等，增加了文章的亮点。