Question

8．假设你是学校Health Club的成员，最近你对你校学生进行了一项有关生活方式的调查，调查相关信息见下表．请根据表格内容为校广播站写一篇80词左右的英文广播稿．

过去	大部分学生骑车或步行上学，两餐之间不吃零食，运动很多
现在	大约三分之一的学生由家长开车送到学校，很多学生吃肉太多，几乎不锻炼
问题与希望	自拟

注意：
广播稿须包括表格中所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
表格中"问题与希望"一栏须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
广播稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Hello everyone!
The Health Club has just held a survey about the lifestyles of our students．Today we are going to share the results．                                                                     
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇应用文体，给材料写作，根据相关信息写一篇广播稿，写作时要注意文体格式；写作的对象是我校学生的生活方式；写作的时态包括现在，过去和将来，包含的时态较多，尤其要注意；写作内容上，要包含表格的所有内容，同时要适当发挥；尽可能多用一些高级词汇，固定短语和高级句型，如：In the past，one third，are driven to school by their parents，too much，as fit as before，take part in，get fit等．

解答 答案：
Hello everyone!
The Health Club has just made a survey about the life styles of our students．Today we are going to share the results．In the past，most of our students rode bikes or walked to school．They didn't eat any snacks between meals and they did a lot of sports．But now，about one third of our students are driven to school by their parents．Many students eat too much meat and seldom exercise．The problem is that more students are getting fat and they're not as fit as before．We hope more students can take part in after-school activities and get fit again．
Thank you!

点评 初中英语的作文特别是初一的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．