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【题目】书面表达

随着电子商务的发展,网上购物已经越来越流行了,请根据下列提示词,描述一下你第一次网购的经历。

要点与参考词汇:want to buy a book, excited, pay money, wait for a long time, broken , sad, call the seller, change, at last , learn be honest, in online shopping

写作要求:1. 内容必须包括上面提示的要点。(尽可能多地应有以上包括要点的词汇,并可以适当发挥)

2. 文章结构合理,条理清晰,语句连贯、行文流畅。

3. 词数:80左右。短文开头已给出,你可以选择使用,或者自己从头开始写。(如选用开头,请接着从下一行开始写,开头不计入总词数。如不选用开头,请空两行,自己从头开始写)

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

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【答案】

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

I could find the book that I wanted in the bookstore. So I decided to buy a book online. I felt a little excited because it was my first time. After paying money online, I waited for a long time.

When the book arrived, it was broken. I felt really angry and called the seller. The seller agreed to change another book for me. I learn that being honest is important in online shopping. At last I got the new book and felt happy. (84 words)

【解析】

试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点:这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

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