Question

【题目】书面表达

A Special Day

提示：在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短

文，记叙你特别的一天。

要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。

3、请将短文写在答题卡上，写在试题卷上无效。

Answer 1

【答案】A Special Day

Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise.

My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。而复杂并列结构My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want.和Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。