Question

9．目前黄石正开展创建文明城市的活动，为了响应号召，请你根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇短文，谈论一下作为中学生我们应该如何参与其中．字数80-100．可以根据提示适当发挥．
提示：
应该：1．从小事做起2．有礼貌  3．保持环境清洁，让城市变得更加清洁、干净4．号召家人一起行动------
不应该：1．随地吐痰2．乱扔垃圾．3．在公共场所大喊大叫------
Recently，we are implementing the activities about civilized city in Huang Shi．As middle school students we should_______________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．
be friendly to sb 对某人友好；in need 需要，作后置定语修饰"the people"．这句话意为：我们应该对别人友好，时刻准备着帮助有需要的人们．
高分句型二：
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and greener．
这句话中"If everyone behaves well"为if引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则，这句话意为：如果每个人都表现得很好，我们的城市将会更漂亮、更清洁．

解答 Recently，we are implementing the activities about civilized city in Huang Shi．As middle school students we should try our best to behave well in the activities．（点明主旨）
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．It's good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．We should never say dirty words．We should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．【高分句型一】For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．
We should try our best to keep our city clean．For example，we shouldn't throw litter everywhere．We should also obey traffic rules．When the traffic lights are red，we should stop．And we'd better not pick flowers in the park．（表达观点）
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and greener．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．