Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Xiao Li，根据表格的信息用英语写一篇短文介绍你和你的朋友Xiao Hua的情况，不少于80词。

Name	Age	From	Class	Grade	Look	Clothes
Xiao Li	12	Quanzhou	1	7	Tall, round face, big eyes	Yellow dress,
Xiao Hua	13	Xiamen	2	7	Short, wide mouth, small nose	Purple T-shirt,pink skirt

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Xiao Li. I am a student. I am 12 years old. She is from Quanzhou. She is tall and she has a round face and big eyes. She like yellow dresses. She has a good friend. Her name is Xiao Hua. Xiao Hua is thirteen years old. She comes from Xiamen. She is short and she has a small mouth and a small nose. She likes purple T-shirt and pink skirt. They are in the same grade, but they are in different classes. Xiao Hua is in Class Two, Grade Seven. Xiao Li is in Class One. We often go to school together.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我和我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍我们的共同点与不同之处，最后指出我们的擅长。此处用了 In some ways，a little more outgoing than，is good at ， am good at等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。