Question

7．泰州市第四届美德少年评选活动正在举行，你们学校推出两名候选人Jim和Jane，班上的A组同学推荐Jim，B组同学推荐Jane．假如你是班长名叫Li Ming，你会推荐谁，理由是什么？请根据表格中的信息和要求给学校负责人吴先生写一份电子邮件，向他汇报具体情况．

观点	理由
Group A推荐Jim	1．他对人礼貌，举止文明…（举一例） 2．他乐于当志愿者，参与募捐活动…（举一例）
Group B推荐Jane	1．她勤奋…乐于助人，得到老师赞扬…（举一例） 2．她保护环境，节约能源…（举一例）
你推荐…	1．作为"美德少年"应该… 2．请至少举一例说明你所推荐的Jim/Jane的品质和能力

参考词汇：virtue[c．n．]美德
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
Dear Mr．Wu，
We have discussed whether Jim or Jane should be a Virtue Teenager．Different groups have different recommendations．
Group A of the class strongly recommend Jim．Because Jim has good manners and behaves politely．For example，he always queues for his turn．/He says"please"or"thank you all the time．He is willing to work as a volunteer．He takes an active part in charity activities．Last week，he sent his clothes to children in poor areas．
However，Group B think Jane is better．She is hard-working and helpful/She is always ready to help others．She often helps the others with lessons．She has won high praise from the teachers．/She is often praised by teachers．She does a lot to help protect the environment and save energy．She always remembers to turn off the lights when she leaves a room．/She always takes shorter showers to save water
In my opinion，I recommendJane（asaVirtue Teenager）．As we all know，a Virtue Teenager must have many virtues and be ready to devote his/her time to people in trouble．And Jane has the quality．For example，she is willing to do extra work for the class in her spare time
I hope my email will be of some value to you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Group B thinks Jane is better．B组认为简更好．    这是一个宾语从句，Group B thinks是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
   高分句型二
She always remembers to turn off the lights when she leaves a room她总是记得离开房间时关灯．    这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 Dear Mr．Wu，
    We have discussed whether Jim or Jane should be a Virtue Teenager．Different groups have different recommendations．
    Group A of the class strongly recommends Jim．Because Jim has good manners and behaves politely．For example，he always queues for his turn．He says"please"or"thank you all the time．He is willing to work as a volunteer．He takes an active part in charity activities．Last week，he sent his clothes to children in poor areas．【要点一，推荐吉姆的理由】
    However，Group B thinks Jane is better【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．She is hard-working and helpful/She is always ready to help others．She often helps the others with lessons．She has won high praise from the teachers．/She is often praised by teachers．She does a lot to help protect the environment and save energy．She always remembers to turn off the lights when she leaves a room【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．/She always takes shorter showers to save water．【要点二，推荐Jane的理由】
    In my opinion，I recommend Jane （ as a Virtue Teenager）．As we all know，a Virtue Teenager must have many virtues and be ready to devote his/her time to people in trouble．And Jane has the quality．For example，she is willing to do extra work for the class in her spare time．【要点三，我推荐Jane】
    I hope my e-mail will be of some value to you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ping

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．